OVERLOAD new tune...

Easy all,

Let me kno what you think of this tune that I have started. Any suggestions let me know

DOWNLOAD:
http://www.ukbassradio.co.uk/ MP3/dubs/OVERLOAD-THATS-RIGHT128k.mp3 [REMOVED]


Big up

yeah man, had me noddin my head back and forth, the bass line needs a bit more impact maybe? not sure, but definately on the right track!

Big Up!

ain't bad that, i've heard far worse

ez m8 i def liked wat i heard but like da ragman sed u cud make the bassline a bit dirtier have a play around wiv it and i look fward to hearin it in da mix

Ive had a play with the bassline,

heres the download for the newer version here:
http://www.ukbassradio.co.uk/ MP3/dubs/OVERLOAD-THATS-RIGHT-newversion02.mp3 [REMOVED]

when the main drop hits, if that wet synth noise was held back for 16 or 32 then it would help to break up the intro from the drop (tube overdrive and other tube settings are very good friends of the bassline) some drum variation would add to this ones potential, nice concepts with all the sounds fo-sho, after 64 bars (after the main drop) or sommin a bass switch withjust 200hz (cut all bass frequencies above 200?) and lower on the subz is a proven technic, then bring back the original bassline after abit........ big up Gav

yeh man good effort. Is this pretty much ur first?

Nice riff man.

Trying to be helpful - Maybe bring out the mid a bit more to accentuate the synths and widen the drums.

Nice one.